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Post by f on Mar 5, 2011 15:35:16 GMT 2
Yeah, at first Hitler too wasn't taken seriously, but then look how much jews he burned...
Anyway, I see you put up the dl link. After testing, here's the critics:
Ok.
First what you want to do is redraw the face. Completely new face will give it character, I can tell that from experience. I don’t know about the hair, but how about making it red. I think it would look awesome, because grey is simply dull and there’s no red-haired chars out there. (Of course, I could be wrong – likewise I thought there aren't any red clothed chars besides Duncan).
FA: The voice sound is nice, but the sounds for the wave itself are missing. Add them. Also, the wave sprites look like a frozen energy wave. It should be more animated. DA: There’s something wrong with the fluidity of the kicks. Maybe you should wanna add more frames or something. UA: This one – flash coming out from the ground after the kick – makes no sense to me. Anyway, you wanna make him open-mouthed and yelling too. Would improve the situation and cover the miracle aura appearance. FJ: I had this problem with my drawings recently. You don’t wanna let the viewer look at someone’s back and arse. It creates displeasure naturally. You should make the sprites facing forward, and it’s more of a must than should. Also, sounds of sliding would be great. DJ: A three-kick combo. The second kick doesn’t extend to its fullest. Fix that, because it looks like a broken leg. I guess, you wanted to make a knee kick of sorts, but just failed at it. And finally, tweek the walking and running and so on speeds a little that it wouldn’t feel like Woody on Helloween.
In hopes of your improvement, yours sincerely.
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