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Post by f on Mar 4, 2011 18:44:39 GMT 2
1. Hat. Make it more (even more) cowboyish. U shaped, I mean. 2. The tattoo on the right arm is ridiculous. Make it a dragon or something alike. 3. Make the saddle black. You went overboard with the tone here. 4. Make the bull visible. At least his head. I think, you’d have a better effect if the bull is real and puffing “smoke” out of his nose in a rage induced state and not just a toy in a bar. 5. Try using a white dot for sparkle in the eyes and see if it looks better. 6. As with the bull, maybe a more passionate expression for the girl would be a fit. It should be an intense emotion not a serene one - remember, she's on a bull, right?
All in all, your drawing lacks a strong emotion which it should depict.
And don’t hurry with the colors.
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